Just as a bit of advice, the pacing seems far too fast. You need to slow down and give each moment its own time.
Thanks for the advice. During that time I didn't understand timing.
I keep trying to say this but all my friends kill me whenever I try!
This is so me.
The voice acting was terrible!
Hey man, It would really help if you let me know how and why the voice acting was bad. And I apoligize for it being so. It's my first animation after learning.
(2 stars or less can get a submission blammed)
This is just an ad! Who would willingly watch an ad?
Strange... But still sort of interesting!
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